நிலவே - பெருமிதம் வேண்டாம்
பௌர்ணமி என்பது உன்னால் மட்டும் இல்லை
அது ஒரு TEAM WORK
சூரியனும், பூமியும், நீயும்
சேர்ந்துசெய்யும் ஒரு TEAM WORK
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மனிதனுக்கு சிறகு முளைத்தால் ......
வானமெங்கும் TRAFFIC JAM
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மழைக்கு யாகம் செய்யும்
அந்த தாடி வைத்த மனிதர்
மரம் வெட்டும் தொழில் செய்யும்
கும்பலுக்கு தலைவர்!
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விஞ்ஞானிகள் மகிழ்ச்சி!
செவ்வாயில் விண்கலம்
சோதிடனால் அதிர்ச்சி
செவ்வாயால் தோஷம்.
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23 comments:
arumai arumai
I will try to upload my compositions later, meanwhile you can listen to my friend srikanths compostions
http://www.srikanthd.com/website/index.html
his blog addr is http://srikanthd.blogspot.com/
Second one is very good. Who are you referring to in 3) ?
Last one - gets the prize.
But, Narayanan, I have to say, the first one is just a prose line structutally modified to look like a kavidhai. How can you slip?
Engalukku negizhchchi
Narayananin vannakkolam (vaarthaikolamnu kooda sollalaam)
:-)
TT_Giant - Quick note.
I agree with the 1st one.
I have to admit here that I am not a Pulavar..Just a Local Lungi..attempting to write something.!
So...Please pardon my mediocre - Pulamai.! I'll try to improve.
Now about the 3rd - Do you know the phrase - kozhandhaiyaum killittu thottilayum attardhu? Its like this....!
We all know that the cutting down of trees is impacting the mother nature, increasing Global warming etc..and it results in drought conditions.
This is to emphasize that people shouldn't put up a show.!
have u recovered?sir can u post ur articles/poems in the english script,if they are in tamil...i would love 2 read ur poems...but i cant read tamil.so english scriptila pst panengana yanakum ongal kavithaiyai padikamudiyum!!!
"Manithanukku Siragu Mulaithal.."
Bought a smile to my face..:)
Manidhanukku siragu "best khanna best":-))
I know Narayanan. Just to usupi yethify you.. just for fun. :-)
yea, i have heard about the pazhamozhi. since you mentioned dhaadi et al, i was wondering if you were talking abt someone in particular. COULD IT BE YOU??!!
Nice lines.. I likedthe Traffic jam.
Its true that the rocks in Mars have been named Pongal... by NASA.. i wonder who brought out that wonderful name when they were deciding on it!! :-)
muthal kavithai muthaaga irunthathu
3rd one ultimate..
sir adikkadi sick leave podunga..kavidhai ellam balamaaa irukku!
jus kidding!
vaantathilee traffic jam... erkanavee vanthutirukke, budget airlineaala.. ithule manithanukkum siragu mulaithaall.... hmmm..
sir no tanglish version :(
Sir,
Good one! liked the last one most!
Rgds,
Sundaresan
2nd one is a nice hi-koo.
Think you always reserve the best for the last one..
ramesh, what happened to TR style?
about "Sevvaai dhosham", may be what those astronomy+astrology professionals are saying is the disturbance to the gravitational field caused by movements of planets and how it impacts you....just something to think about....
I dont agree with all the nonsense that goes behind that name "Sevvai dhosham" but maybe a true astrologer/astronomer who has studied it deeply can possibly shed some light..
how true abt josiyar! naluku nalu nalla wine madiri unga collection superb ayite iruku :)
Folks,
Thanks for all your comments. Due to severe time pressure, I am not able to respond individually.
Subakshi - I am honored.!
Grey vampire and the rest - sorry about Thanglish.!! I promise I will remember going forward.!
Please see the next comment for Thanglish
Thanglish effort
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Nilave - perumidham vendaam
Pournami enbadhu unaal mattum illai
adhu oru TEAM WORK. Sooriyanum, Boomiyum, neeyum serndhu seyyum oru TEAM Work
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Manidhanukku Siragu Mulaithaaal
Vaanamengum - Traffic Jam
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mazhaikku yaagam seyyum
andha - Thaadi veitha manidhar
maram vettum thozhil seyyum
kumbalukku thalaivar
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Vinyanigal magizhchi
Chevvayil vinkalam
Jodhidanaaal athirchi
Chevvaayaal Dhosham.
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Narayanan,
first and third were lovely. nice short kavidhai's after a long time for me.
Balaji,
Thank you
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