Sunday, December 25, 2005

மதி இழந்தாய் மனிதா

ஆடலும் பாடலும்
ஊடலும் கூடலும்
வாழும் வரைதானே

வேதங்கள் சொல்லும்
போதனை கேட்டால்
சாதனை செய்யலாம் - நீ
தேவனை காணலாம்

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நிலவுக்கு அவன் கொடுத்த
இருளை நீ எதற்கு
மனதிற்குள் சூழ வைத்தாய்

கதிருக்கு அவன் கொடுத்த
இளவானில் நீ எதற்கு
உதிரத்தால் கோலமிட்டாய்

மலர் கொடுத்தான் -
முள்ளாலே சட்டை போட்டாய்

மரம் கொடுத்தான் -
வேர் அறுத்து - வாடவைத்தாய்

மதி இழந்தாய் மனிதா - மதி இழந்தாய்
உனை மறந்து - அறிவிழந்து
மதி இழந்தாய்

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இனியும் குறை இல்லை
அவன் அருள் நாடு

மத வாதம்
இன பேதம்
மொழி பேதம் போக்கு

வானம் வசப்படும்
பூமி செழிப்புறும்
நாடு வளம்பெரும்
வீடு அருள்பெரும்

23 comments:

Krish said...

EngaL NarayananJi-yum thirumbhi varuvaar
Kavidhai mazhaiyil engaLai nanaiya vaikka

:-)

News from Prasanna said...

Welcome Back Narayanan Sir. Sachich return madiri super kavidhaiyoda return pannirikinga. soon Expecting a music composition of this.

Krish said...

Welcome back!

have fun sir.. and enlighten us :)

KRTY said...

vaanga vaanga !

Tsunami Mudinju inniyoda oru Varusham aavudhu !!

Blog ulagin Tsunami (Chakravukkum idhe title dhaan) !!

Balaji said...

good to have u back narayanan. super kavidhai to mark your return :)

monu said...

wow!
i liked the flower-thorn part
wonderful poetry!

Nallavan said...

welcome back sir.
vanthavudane kallakitinga ponga

Anonymous said...

Kavidhai eyidhikkine thirubhi varaaan da maamein :-)

Unknown said...

Is this a spl one for X-mas ?

Anonymous said...

nice to see u back

Ram said...

arumaiyaana kavidhai sir, it had a lots of meaning it, menmaelum idhu pondra kavidhaigalai edhirparkkirom...

Anand said...

back with a bang... welcome back NV sir... romba santhosama iruku.. unga post pakka...

arumaiyana kavidhai :)

Matt said...
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Matt said...

Nice thought Sir,
" Devanai Kaanalam " - Line iukkurathu pola, "Vedhanai Neengividum" - nu oru line add pannalam sir.
Cheers!!

Anonymous said...

Sir, Welcome back! kalakkal poemngov..last word 'Arul' la vera 'ru' varumnu nenakkaren.

Kiranz..!! said...

Narayanjee..

Welcome back n'nice seeing ur postingz again..!I am also here thru Jo..

I am sorry cuz i dont know to read tamil,but lov hearing ur tune'z n lyrics through Jo'z voice..!!

Amazing tunez..!

shivku said...

I wanted to tell you that your "kaadhal song" was neat! I didnt find a place to comment on that blog article though. Your H1B Visa song was funny too. Though, it takes too much out of me to read tamil on unicode.

Narayanan Venkitu said...

Shivku - Thanks for your comments. I appreciate it. Looks like you were around town..in the wineries.!
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Kiran - Thank you for your compliments. I love your songs too.
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Sundaresan - You are right, I will correct it...thank you.
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Hiren - Thank you
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Balaji - Thank you
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Susubala - Thank you
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Matt - Very nice idea..Let me think..Somehow I missed it yesterday. Would be very powerful indeed.
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Anand Prabhu - Thank you.
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Ram - Thank you. Yeah, I felt so too..when I wrote it...though I could have done the last 2 verses even better..
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Katpadi Murali - Thank you
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Jagan Lee - I was laughing yesterday when I read your thathuvams..
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Jagan - Thank you, Yeah, Its for X-mas.!
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Don - Thanks da.
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Nallavan - Thank you
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Monu - Thank you, I liked your Love poem yesterday.!
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Balaji - Thank you Sir
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Keerthi -Tsunami ya..!! Maybe Chakkra.the big guy.not me..!! Actually it can be you.! Super blogger.!
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Krish - Thank you
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Prasanna - Good idea..let me think :)
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Thennavan - Thank you Sir.

Narayanan Venkitu said...

Krish - Thank you

tt_giant said...

Come back match la 5-wicket haul maadhiri!

Welcome back!..

krishna said...

Dear Narayanji

Liked reading your kavidhai..

Avan Arul InrundhAldhAn naam avan Arulzhai Naadichella mudiyum. EllAm avan Icchai allavA

JagadhAnandhakArakAya NamohsthuthE

Jeevan said...

nalla kavithai friend. Kavithina athu Venkitu Kavithai thaan.:)

Ganesh Venkittu said...

Ramesh, very good one....you could modify as below...

மதி இழந்தாய்
மதி போனதால்
கதி மறந்தாய்
கதி போனதால்
விதி வழி விழுந்தாய்
விழுந்தவன் என்று
எழுந்தாய்?