Monday, July 25, 2005

கவிதைப் போட்டி ( கடைசி நாள் JULY-27)

நண்பர்களே!

நியாபகம் இருக்கட்டும் - JULY-27-2005
உங்கள் திறமையை காட்ட கடைசி நாள்

இதோ - விதிமுறைகள் இங்கே

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உங்களை ஊக்குவிக்க எனது படைப்பு

( சும்மா தான் - நான் பங்கேற்க முடியாது )
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கடலோரம் ஒரு - கருத்த நாய்

- காலை முதல் மாலை வரை
- அமைதியாக அமர்ந்து
- அலைகைளை ஆராய்ந்து
- யாருக்கும் அஞ்சாமல்
- மழைக்கு மருளாமல்


TSUNAMI கொண்டு போன ஏஜமானை
'நம்பிக்கையுடன்' எதிர்ப்பார்த்து!

29 comments:

krishna said...

vow...that was ultra-cool...

Antha Naikku uzhlla viswasathil oru thuzhiyaavadhu manidhargalidam irundhal evalavu arumayaga irukkum..

baley baley.

Adaengappa !! said...

Well Said..

IBH said...

wow! very good one Venkitu sir!

ioiio said...

Nallaakeedhu sirey..

Krishna,
tamil kolai paarthu irukken.. Idhu tanglish kolai

monu said...

that was wonderful...
the drawing was great too.......
:)
did you sketch that one??
if you did , then i am going to be jealous of your multiple talents
:)

krishna said...

ioiio,

yemmaku avalavu thaan thamizh arivu..yenna seivadhu???

orite dude.. will try to stop but i bet i wudn't coz its in my blood;)

krishna said...

narayanan sir,

is there a way out of registering with audioblog.com without shelling out bucks??

plz help a poor student..;)

Jo said...

Hey bro,

Some how I managed to read this post. :-) Let me know if what I write below is correct. (???) -- This sign shows that I didnt understand the word.
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njyaapakam irukkattum. July-27-2005.
unkaL thiramayai (???) kaatta kadaissi naal.
ithO vidhi muRaikaL inkey

unkaLai uLakkuvikka (???) enathu padaippu.
(summaa thaan - naan pankaRke (???) mudiyaathu

kadalOram oru -- karutha naai

-- kaalai muthal maalai varai
-- amaithiyaaga amarnthu (???)
-- alaigalai aaraainthu (???)
-- yaarukkum anjaamal (???)
-- mazhaikku maruLaamal

TSUNAMI kandu pona ejamaanai
nambikkaiyudan ethiRpaaRthu!
---------------------------------------------------

hah! I finished. Lemme know my mistakes. :-)

ada-paavi!!!! said...

best of luck to all the wanna be VAALIS, VAIRAMUTHUS, Na MUTHUKUMARS out there,

Robbie said...

Narayan:
SUPERB thalaiva! nice poem. Andha nai mattum en karuppa ellai?

வெங்கி / Venki said...

Nice and touching one, Narayanan Sir

Ganesh said...

Really good one.

tt_giant said...

Very nice one. The boxer's sad face matches perfectly.

Unknown said...

I am so looking forward to tomorrw :)

Woodooz said...

Hi Narayanan,

Just came across this kavidhai potti and I have still not learnt to blog in Tamil. And so, I have posted my entries in a jpeg file in my blog post. Is that fine ? Kindly let me know, else by hook or crook I would have to do something :o)

My blog post can be viewed in

http://psomu.blogspot.com/2005/07/nambikkai.html

Thanks,
Somu.

Anonymous said...

Sir,

Super kavidhai and the pic was too good...who sketched?...couldnt make out with the sign in the sketch!!!

KRTY said...

good one Venkittu Sir,

Do you know the meaning of "Yejamanekaarmaanam".. i saw this at the back of a car , here in chennai.. you should be the right person to ask,

(Mis)Chief Editor said...

ithuthaan 'mooda' nambikkaiyo:-)

Mey said...

My attempt

http://meysun.blogspot.com/2005/07/blog-post_26.html

Anonymous said...

And here is my attempt :)

http://meyya.blogspot.com/

Anonymous said...

Dear Venkat, following is my entry

http://jvcruz.blogspot.com/2005/07/blog-post_27.html

Thanks.

NS said...

Thanks to u, I have ventured into poetry writing... have written 3 poems, all are available under one blog... check out here

Directhit said...

are forwards also accepted ;-))

NS said...

One more entry from my side, so that makes it 4 from me!! Read here... and let me know your views..:-)

Munimma said...

wokay, here goes...

Adaengappa !! said...

ஐயா,
எனக்கு கவிதை எல்லாம் எழுதி பழக்கம் இல்லை..
என்னமோ இங்கே கிறுக்கி இருக்கேன்... பாருங்க...

நன்றி

Anonymous said...

And again with the right url http://meyyapan.blogspot.com

(Mis)Chief Editor said...

இறை நம்பிக்கை

NambikkaiRAMA said...

நாய்க்கு இருக்கும் நம்பிக்கை கூட நமக்கில்லை என்ற ஆதங்கம் உங்கள் கவிதையில் தெரிகிறது.நன்றி!