Wednesday, July 27, 2005

கவிதைப் போட்டி - இன்று கடைசி நாள்

நேரம் நெருங்குகிறது - JULY-27-2005 - California time - 12.00 Midnight
Multiple Posts - Allowed


நம்பிக்கை இல்லாத வாழ்க்கை
தும்பிக்கை இல்லாத - யானை

நம்பணும் உழைப்பை
வெம்பணும் மூட நம்பிக்கைகள்!

நம்பி - கையில் எடு WILL ஐ **
அம்பிட்டு - நாணேற்று ** Thanks - TT_GIANT

அம்பு விடு - நாணேற்றி

சீதையும் கிடைப்பாள் -கூடவே
புதுப் பாதையும் கிடைக்கும்!

** Will Power

14 comments:

Anjali said...

hi where there is a will there is a waygood kavithai

Anjali said...

wow

tt_giant said...

pity you cannot join the contest..:-)..

one small thing:
நாணேற்று means attaching the string to the bow, right?

So, maybe it should be that first and then ambittu..

Narayanan Venkitu said...

Anjali - Thank you

TT_giant - I think you are right. I missed it. Thank you Sir, I've updated the post.

tt_giant said...

Narayanan: thought you would displace the words.. but wow..you simply changed the tense..nice usage of the language.

Vijay Ramamurthi said...

Saar, naanum just for the sake of fun, have written a few lines.

http://neverendingjourneys.blogspot.com
/2005/07/kavithai-potti.html

I know everbody wud be laughing by now, because even I was laughing, there is a message for all such people in the post

eppadikku

(Mis)Chief Editor said...

இறை நம்பிக்கை

Subbu said...

சீதையும் கிடைப்பாள் -கூடவே
புதுப் பாதையும் கிடைக்கும்!

Already "Parthipan" married "Seetha" after Puthiya pathai.. so no chance ;)

Just for fun.
-Subbu

tt_giant said...

@Subbu... LOL: they divorced man.. so it is still possible!!

PVS said...

Here is mine

http://kadambam.blogspot.com/2005/07/nambikkai.html

KRTY said...

venkittu Sir,

keerthivasan adiyen kavidhai bloggil paarkkavum ;

ioiio said...

I never thought the response wud be so big.. Its good for the community

Robbie said...

Hope

early in the morning,
like fresh flowers that just bloomed,
she walked by me, oh that fragrance
she smiled and nodded her head,
I just stared in bewilderment
Is she the one?
I will never know for it was the airport and she was on a flight to honolulu
but, I still hope
that I will meet her one day
maybe it wont be morning then,
and she will stop by me to say Hi!

Robbie said...

Narayan:
The fellow who described "her" was a janitor in the airport! :P. just a figment of my imagination to add color to your wonderful competition. I just wrote this for you in the spur of the moment, for I know that you love poems.