குயில் கருத்தது
- பிறந்த இடத்தின் பெருமை சேர்க்க
காக்கை கருத்தது
- குயிலினம் உலகில் செழிக்க
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சொர்க்கத்திலே நிச்சயிக்கப்பட்ட
பல திருமணங்கள்
நரக வாழ்வை கொடுப்பதால்
நரகத்திலே நிச்சயித்தால் என்ன?
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23 comments:
romba negative-aa irukku.......
athu sari - muthal kavithaikku enna artham:-)
kuyil karuththathu
- pirantha idathin perumai serkka
kakkai karuththathu
- kuyil inam ulagil chezhikka
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Sorkathilae nichayikkappatta
pala thirumanangal
naraga vazhvai koduppadhaal
naragathile nichayithaal enna?
Ranganathan Sir.
Enna adhukkla oru comment.!
Sorry about being negative.
Mudhal kavidhaikku artham illai.
Oru vithyasamana sindhanai..avvalavu dhaan.!
sorry...
naan munthikinen!!
Marriage life is like hell (thats what everyoine says..), So atleast let them be MADE in heaven.
actually, the first one does have a meaning, if you assume that kuil is cuckoo (am not sure though)..
the cuckoo lays her eggs in a crows nest (on account of laziness - its nature). the dumb crow thinks its one of its own and broods it with the other eggs. the cuckoo hatches first and the baby cuckoos push the crow's eggs out..
poor crow.. for the sake of the cuckoo...
this has a striking quality of "modern-art" paintings.. the observer is over enthusiastic in deriving meanings from the paintings more than what the artist would have thought..
Narayanan: kalakki podunga.. you have made me do that..
TTG - You are right indeed, it is about the kuyil - cuckoo. I thought about that...and several thoughts ran thru my mind.! This was the one I thought I'll publish today.!
KEERTHI - eppa...naan illai...that's why I said ' Pala thirumanangal'.
Narayanan:
Your thoughts are flowing like a river, I have no words to describe your poems, simply stupendous!!!
You manage to tell what I want to say in just three lines!!
yey, sir kavidhai pottutaar!!!!
modhal kavidhai suthamaa puriyala...marriage, ipdi kalyanam pannikkittavanga solldraangaley, adhu correct dhaana apdinnu paakkalaamnu irukken ;))..naragamo, sorgamo, nadandhaa sari apdinnu nariya per irukkaango (am not in that ;)
Second one was good ! Nice though waves !
the second one was beautiful
:)
and i didnt understand the first one
:(
திரு. நாரயணன்.. என் கவிதைக்கு ஏக்கத்துடன் கருத்தெழுதிய கீர்த்தியை உங்கள் கவிதை திசை திருப்பிவிட்டது போல....!!! அல்லது இங்கே கருத்து பதிந்து விட்டு அங்கே வந்தாரா???
muthal kavithai enakkum puriya villai...nandri, TTG, kavithai ippozhuthu purigirathu.
Rendaavudhu kavidhai depressing :(
Sir,
I liked the second one..
I liked the second one.
But love or arranged marriage
can never predict which is better
only thing love marriage they have blame each other for fall out, in arranged one can always blame parents and relative
nice :-)
Me too like the second one, nice though :)
TTG explaination super.
சொர்க்கத்திலே நிச்சயிக்கப்பட்ட
பல திருமணங்கள்
நரக வாழ்வை கொடுப்பதால்
நரகத்திலே நிச்சயித்தால் என்ன?
wow..nice.. man. :)
liked the 2nd one... more straightforward.... but ttg's explanation of first one made a lot sense...
Romba nanna ezhuthareenga..
When I read the second one, enakku "Aval Oru Thodarkathai" lendhu indha paatu thaan nyabagan vanthathu,
"kadavul amaithu vaitha medai innaikkum kalyaana maalai, innaarkku innarendru ezhuthi vaithanaane dhevan andru"
eppadikku
FOLKS The first kavidhai is just my imagination.
Cuckoo's lay their eggs in Crows nests and Crows let them do it.!
Just my imagination.! That's it.!
ROBBIE - OOO - Romba cold..!! Thank you.!
Sundaresan - Thank you Sir.!
Jayan - Thank you Sir!
Ram - I read your poem yesterday and also saw the comments. I wanted to post a comment but
something came up and I forgot.
PVS - Hope my top comment clarifies it Sorry.!
Wicked Angel - Agreed...but that is life I think.!
AF - Thank you Sir.
Ganesh - I know...someone to blame...umm..!! and they take the blame and worry as well.!! ( I mean parents / relatives)
Aravind - Thank you
K Scope - Thanks, Yes, TT_G's explanation was superb, I liked it as well.
Srikanth - Thank you Sir.
Balaji - Straight forward yes....Married life....not really.!! I agree about TT_G's explanation.
Vijay R - thanks for stopping by. What a song.! Innarkku innarendu.! who wrote it?
Enjoyed a lot!
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